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F09T Book 1 Chapter 12Fox O'Nine Tales
Book One: Larissa of Foxwood

Chapter 12

"We are halfway to our destination. You rode very well last night."
Dr. Gwen looked up into the great wolf's face, which fairly glowed, its frame of sleek wolf-hair looking like glistening flames in the illumination of the setting sun's last rays. She attempted a small smile at the compliment. But even the muscles in her face were still sore from the exhausting ride, even after she had slept almost the entire day away. She had awakened only an hour earlier to find a meal left warming for her over a nearby campfire. There was also in the near distance a small makeshift te

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FROM:   SUPREME COMMANDER RAVENAL

TO:         ALL LOYAL REGIONAL COMMANDERS OF THE WOLFEN GUARD

I AM DECLARING A KINGDOM-WIDE EMERGENCY AT THIS TIME.

BY MAJORITY WOLFEN GUARD COMMAND DECISION AND DECREE,

I, RAVENAL, AM NOW ASSUMING SUPREME COMMAND OF THE WOLFEN GUARD,  AND PROVISIONAL GUARDIANSHIP OF ALL FOXWOOD.

FOR THEIR OWN SAFETY, AND TO AVERT A PUBLIC PANIC, THE COUNCIL OF PRINCESSES ARE NOT TO BE ADVISED OF THE SUSPENSION OF THEIR AUTHORITY AND REDUCTION IN LEGAL STATUS TO "ADVISORY ONL

The Foxwood GazetteTHE FOXWOOD GAZETTE__________________________

Special Dispatch!

by Stuart the Reporter Fox (Foxwood Gazette Editor-In-Chief,

Investigative Reporter, and Gossip Correspondent)

WHERE IS KNIGHT NATHANIEL?

(FO9AP) – Athena. Rumors continue to swirl and near-panic threatens to erupt in civic discord and unrest as the unsettled questions plaguing the Kingdom of Foxwood's capital continue to go unanswered and Princess Winona and the other Princesses of the Council persist in stonewalling the press, your humble servant here, Stuart, so included.

The reports of an alien visitor – fallen from the sky! – continue to come in to th

F0X09T Book 1 Chapter 11 The second night of the long ride forged on and for seemingly forever on, Knight Nathaniel on his powerful stallion, midnight black, and Dr. Gwen on her swift Arabian, a beautiful bay mare, the two riders parting the endless sea of flowing saddle pommel-high grasses beneath the ghostly full moon, two hurtling fugitives awash in the shimmering pale lunar light.

Dr. Gwen wondered to herself just how long she might be able hold on to her galloping ride, but her horse seemed to have become almost an organic part of herself, so sensitive to her every slip and hesitation, the horse catching her and righting her in the saddle every time s

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Just a valve with attitude.

Critique by ~OpaquelyMysterious Apr 7, 2012, 8:01:42 AM

It's clearly seen that this piece's originality can be identified. How often do you see something like this? Not many people get the idea that a partially cocked valve would exhibit attitude, but it actually does look that way being that it is bent over partway. The title may be considered cliché for some, but it describes the point nicely. That's what makes the originality good here..

The picture quality itself is excellent, you can see it in clear detail. The colors, the bent valve in the middle, and the background trees are well seen. Also the fence makes it look interesting too.

Now, the technique makes it technique is what makes it purely pristine. This should stay a photograph, just as it is. However, I'm not ruling out the possibility of another interpretation of it, just so long as the original picture stays intact here.

The impact is of an unusual nature. I mean, how often do you see someone using a bent valve to portray attitude and feel? That's what makes it truly original. The idea can be a good impacting one. Also, the involvement of nature in this brings on a whole new feel to it. Usually, when you see something using an attitude like this, it's glamorous or flashy or something of that nature most of the time. This is one of those pieces saying "I am what I am. You talkin' to me? Don't criticize me!" Nature is nature. Don't mess with her.

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